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Day of the Dragons

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Note: As this premise and seven others like it were never written, I've decided to write them as I imagine them happening, and treat them as Season 4 episodes. Note that in this format, I have made these episodes post-Requiem. So Venger has been redeemed. This is Season 4, Episode 3 (#31 in total).

The first one I gravitated to was this very one. In time, you can find the others below. 
Janapurna and the Stallions of Hokar by j3px



Special Note: Many of these premises contain Venger as the main villain, while in at least one, he doesn't appear at all. But.... in keeping with my post-Requiem plan, I shall rewrite Venger as a protagonist, substituting another (hopefully) well-placed- villain for him.

The children have bargained with Dungeon Master for passage home, & summons back to the Realm by a redeemed Venger. Their third post-Requiem adventure tests their friendship when the life of someone very close to them is in danger. Will they pass?

I also will write the teleplays for the stories I have written/am writing if and as time allows.
As I've had this show in my blood since age 9, I've done my absolute best to capture the personality, expressions, and quirks of each character in every story I write.

Note: Though most of my deviations happen to be animation, I'm also an aspiring animation writer. One of my dream jobs is to write for animation professionally. Christy Marx (G.I.J.O.E., JEM, Transformers, et al.) has been my biggest inspiration, followed by a short list of others that include Marc Zicree (Mighty Orbots, Galaxy High School et al.), Gordon Bressack (Bionic Six et al.), Mark Evanier (D&D:tAS, Spiderman and His Amazing Friends, et al.) and Michael Reaves (D&D:tAS, Blackstar et al).

Enjoy this story!

Premise: Richard Merwin
Story: :iconj3px:

You can find the premise here:
www.dungeonsdragonscartoon.com…
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